there's not much going on during intro tbh, so I'd make it shorter (by half even) or add some more elements
it has a better groove than your previous songs, the sounds kinda talk to each other, at some sections literally :)
also mix is much cleaner, though the snare thing gets a bit heavy on ears after a while, especially when it hits at the same time as that cymbal, I would EQ the high frequencies more
overall a nice piece, carry on
i got a review
I'll look into it
I must say the arrangent doesn't make much sense to me... I would probably build the song around the uplifting chords from the beggining a write some catchy melody around it, since it's supposed to be more of an upbeat thing... I mean the drums have groove but melodic content is really poor, also the bassline should stand out more
0:38/0:45 those blips don't fit much imo
I see no point in using 2 different kicks
0:53 there's just no transition, try using some effects at start and end of each section
0:26/0:85 the fx is a bit heavy on ears, should be quiter
also ending feels very cut, it just stops out of nowhere
hope this helps a bit, I don't want to sound discouraging in any way but this is not very good yet, try watching some tutorials about dance (house) song structure and listen to some other tracks of this genre, inspire yourself
good luck :)
dood where is the bass? This is just drum and drum.. :) It totally lacks some synth in lower octaves that would reinforce the progression..
as already said, mix could use some tweaking.. at some places (e.g. 0:37ish) you can feel that the mix can't breathe, maybe turn down reverb a bit and think out what should be the first thing that hit your ears and what should more in backround, it all can't have the same loudness
but musically it's pretty good, I like the progression and sound choice
keep it up
Thanks for the review! I am still not very familiar with mixing stuff too much, so I will definitely work on it for my next song!
His eyes look like he's crying/high a bit :D
awesome work though
Yeah, unintended on the way the glaze melted, but the red was. He does look like he just ripped a fat load.
Just here to say it looks sooo cool :)
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