70 audio Reviews with Responses


untitled1 untitled1

Rated 4 / 5 stars

is that piano recorded live at least? sounds very ok

add some sub yo


DelitescentAria responds:

me? being good at an instrument?
bruh

(with the notes i have on there its not possible)

(moreover im trash at actual playing)


It's A Cold Day It's A Cold Day

Rated 3 / 5 stars

needs more rap... I need to hear you rapping or my life is never going to be complete

overall it's pretty loopy, lacks some major change in the flow, at least some break in the middle would be nice

mix feels nice

it has that gta loading screen vibes


DelitescentAria responds:

me rapping?

no thanks, i sound like the aftermath of a way too intrusive dentist appointment.

thanks for review


-ir{s}rr-okmB-aa -ir{s}rr-okmB-aa

Rated 3 / 5 stars

no 4/4 kick no house bro (or sis or whatever you are)

musically your songs start to make sense, enough of elements and stuff, but

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the drops don't have much an impact, feels like the build-ups are louder (or as loud) and that you just don't want in any song of this type

overall I don't get the right brosteppy feel out of this.. put mp3 of this into fl together with similar professional song and compare the waveforms - it has be pushed to the 0db ceiling a bit to feel right, your thing is not crushed enough,

needs more Seamless

peace


DelitescentAria responds:

will crush more

thing is, when i crush my songs to the 0db ceiling, they just end up being not loud enough so idk

maybe i need more compression up in my shit

thanks (its sis)


Porter Robinson - Lionhearted (Tubular Remix) Porter Robinson - Lionhearted (Tubular Remix)

Rated 3 / 5 stars

I would add some more little effects and stuff to the drops, they feel a bit empty... of course you got nice loud drums and vocal and lead but it's really the little, barely audible things that do the magic

at 3:40 and on I can hear some dissonance between the vocal and the background synth, not sure if that's intentional, but it doesn't fit to the rest of the song imo

the drop lead could be turned down as a whole, or EQed a bit more, feels a bit overwhelming

mix overall is not terrible but could use more tweaking, it'll get better as time goes (if you keep doing it :)

keep it up


Twerpless responds:

I (and other people I've asked) agree with what you've said about the drop as well as the EQ issues, but I've never considered adding some barely audible stuff. Hmm... interesting...
Anyways, thanks for responding! Any criticism/suggestions are appreciated!


Party Hardcore Party Hardcore

Rated 3 / 5 stars

how about make a whole song out of it? Nobody here likes 9 sec loops :)

pretty hard do write anything constructive about it too


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DJ-Silent responds:

Im actually working on that since i uploaded this song


Mithyx - Basketball on an Empty Court [chill EP] Mithyx - Basketball on an Empty Court [chill EP]

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

the sidechain is a bit too hard to my taste, but I guess that's how this style works :)

nice c h i l l vibes you got here


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MithyxSounds responds:

Thanks! Yeah, the sidechain is rather hard, I figured I was pushing it a bit.


Slimy Asian Slimy Asian

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

some more variations in the beat would be cool

some more variations in the instruments' rthythm would be cool

the hi-hat thing a bit less loud would be cool

overall noice chill thing, original approach (((((((:((((((((((((:))))))))))))):))))))


DelitescentAria responds:

i getchu
would be cool indeed
thonk

edit: hihat thing is coffee beans and a knife in kinetic sand

m u h asmr


Flight (Pegasus, part II Concept) Flight (Pegasus, part II Concept)

Rated 3 / 5 stars

hey there

something seems off about the low frequencies, either the sub isn't loud enough or it clashes with the sub of the kick, it helps to shorten the drum samples as much as possible (long boomy kick may sound good on its own but it can muddy the mix a lot), maybe highpass the kick around 60-80Hz...

I would also add some more hi-hats/cymbals/highpassed drum break to the main parts, to my taste this is too minimal

both piano and pads could be turned down a bit

also developing the melody more at later parts would be nice, I'm all into minimalistic approach, but this kinda leads to nowhere, overall vibe is nice though

and comparing your song to some similar, profesional one is always a good idea, maybe with anylizers like SPAN if you don't trust your ears/ sound system

hope this helps a bit, keep it up :)


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SierraRising responds:

hiya,
thanks a lot for the tip on the low frequencies, I definitely have to include that in the mixing process.
minimal is where I was heading with this track, but I will spice it up a bit more next time :)
strange, some other people off of NG that listened to it said the piano should have been louder. guess that´s a personal taste thing.
I rarely reference my tracks, though I probably should. I use SPAN vigorously on every project.
Your feedback is always welcome, you magnificent DnB beast :) thanks a ton, I appreciate it!


Hype Song Hype Song

Rated 5 / 5 stars

this is the future of music! - create 13 sec loop and let listeners imagine the rest of the track in their heads


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Hikari responds:

what is music ?


Monday Nov 08 2016 1318 - Sinister Banjo Monday Nov 08 2016 1318 - Sinister Banjo

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

yup, sounds sinister

there's not much to rate on this thing, really, since this is a banjo solo played throught a keyboard, right

could work as a background music for some game/movie set in dark medieval or something, I personally wouldn't listen to this just like that, like a regular song, sounds a bit empty to me

good luck with your future creations :)


Kelpalots responds:

Oh dear. I couldn't possibly re-record this because those little messups make it sound like tongue and this music talks, in many ways really... But I made a lot better ones, I just deal with MS, so it's not always easy to maneuver. http://www.newgrounds.com/playlists/view/18e4a1384b0945fc9122a6353a1f682c I make other genres but I love doing this. It's basically improv work that is done while it's recording. It means I play a track I did not rehearse while recording it. And as I already said I did use a piano keyboard. It has weighted keys however, and is very nice enough to be able to make this sound good. I know it could sound a lot better, but the tongue is going to be hard to re-replicate. Some of it isn't accidental. I enjoy it.