5TanLey's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Subspace]

hiii, sounds very spacy and scifiy, 1:30 I imagine running trying to find a way out of a spaceship that is going to explode in like 2 mins

as for the second drop, maybe I would do the music-stops-thing only for a few bars and then continue with the regular flow

mix sounds very clean to me, so these were my 2 cents, keep it up :)

DelitescentAria responds:

hey hey, happy to see you here, im glad the mix sounds clean, even if i disagree on the final drop; i simply think it cooks like that, but i see what you mean.

it do got that scifi vibe, doesn't it?

'ppreciate you, as always

[Collector]

whaaaaaat there are time signatures other than 4/4 in this world ?? :OOO

it flows nicely, the bass coming at 0:22 is goood, arps very wild, maybe could use some tiny pieces of vocals from time to time to spice it up, but thats just an idea

mix is alright, pretty clean, but my ears are almost 30 at this point, dont trust them

Keep it up :)

DelitescentAria responds:

i know right, its shocking that something other than 4/4 is out there (says the one that writes in alt time signatures all the time for fun) :OOOO

the arps are kinda wild by design tbh but i see what you mean, something to break up the barrage, ill keep it in mind for next time, i did think the accent notes up top were enough but goes to show what i know (joking, ofc)

no need to get your ears checked, old man, the mix DOES sound fine, if these studio quality headphones are to be trusted anyways (i am also feeling like im speedrunning years sometimes, did you know people can be born after 2005? that shit aint real)

i always keep it up :) (i try)

[Converge]

hey there, very fluffy indeed
all the sounds are balanced nicely, the arrangement could use some part without drums, to calm it down a bit and then bring back, and the ending comes kinda out of nowhere but overall pretty good

keep it up :))

DelitescentAria responds:

hi hi!
i do agree that it could've used a part without drums, it slipped my mind though because i love amen breaks so much

arrangement, my arch nemesis. im getting ok at mixing, but my dark horse remains...

thank you for the comment :)

[Stomp]

helooo

i love the first drop, in the second tho the kick feels too heavy when you play it so often but maybe thats just me,
keep it up (:)

DelitescentAria responds:

hellooooooo

ofc you would love the first drop, youre a dnb guy :P
the kick was meant to be a lot tbh. its stompy, its aggressive, its a lot and thats the point. but i get how that can be a lot

thanks for the review, i promise im still making music and i havent disappeared; just been busy

[In Control]

could use some more variation in the rhythm, but otherwise it sounds super clean
noice :(')

[Swing]

heyy thats such a cool rhythm

I think you mix better than me at this point, so keep it up :)

DelitescentAria responds:

thanks man <3 i wanted to try a swing rhythm and a little bit of jazz impov so it made this

[Silver]

dis gut, cleanest mix ever and it's nice musically as well, maybe the second drop could be more different

but

you progressed a lot, keep it up :)

DelitescentAria responds:

youre too nice to me <3

i try to keep it up

[Better, Warmer]

Hey there,
musically it's really good, the beat is catchy, great sample choice and the vocals fit nicely as well. I like the overall atmosphere of the track, energetic and motivating yet relaxing

great job with the mix as well, everything feels just right, at least to my ears

sounds like you know what you are doing, keep it up :)

LuckyDee responds:

Awesome, thanks for taking the time to respond

[Incentive]

hellooo

the kick has a lot of bottom end, so it gets very bassy already before the drop, which kind of loses the impact (1:08), otherwise it works, nice and sinister :)

DelitescentAria responds:

oh yes hi
thank you for the feedback ily