5TanLey's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spirits]

Hey there,

regarding idiots - worry only about constructive criticism, anything else doesn't matter :) If you differ from the norm in some way, even a tiny bit, people will always point it out, some even attack, so it goes in this world

regarding the song - that synth that comes in 2:06 feels too bright, other than that it's mixed well, musically it's super nice, the arrangement flows smoothly and the variety of sounds keeps me entertained whole time

Keep it up :)

[Fractured]

very...deadly indeed

maybe the snare could have a longer, reverbed tail, you know... boom - tshhhhhhh, boom - tshhhhhhh,

other than that, the production is great, very clean, you really progressed,
keep it up :)))

DelitescentAria responds:

idk man, i like to keep it tight, especially in these really strong distortion heavy songs. if i had let it ring, it would've bled into the other sounds, so the ringing snare was already a match made in heaven i didnt wanna just mess with it too much

love ya bud, keep it real, ill keep dropping tracks of questionable quality

[Meltdown]

hey there, this sounds like old SeamlessR to me, everything is nicely balanced and arrangement also got better since the last time I listened to your stuff, keep it up :¨)

DelitescentAria responds:

youre the best, man
thanks for the kind words

wish you the best

[Always Be Around]

Not much to say here, great melodic feel and production as well, keep it up :)

[Candlelit Waltz]

4/5 I didnt hear any candles in the mix
and some bassline would be nice
other than that nice melodies and progression :ú

DelitescentAria responds:

you FOOL

the baroque era has no such thing as a "bassline"

your ignorance insults me!

jk jk thanks for the review
i wanted to keep it kinda authentic and it was based on a scene in a story im writing so theres no candles because of the setting! (kinda idk) i just really liked those damn chords

[Wolf's Spirit]

The sound design and mixing are flawless, though arrangement-wise it's a bit short, I would develop the melody more and add some more synths, at least at the second drop, also the transition at 0.55 feels very sudden, out of nowhere

overall, really good, keep it up :)

[Trapped Space]

The atmosphere is nice and sinister, I imagine droids marching through a starship and destroying everything, good job on sound design and arrangement

the mix and the technical side of the song are pretty clean, maybe the snare-clap gets lost a bit behind the synths in the later parts, other than that it's perfect

keep it up :)

[Just Havin A Smoke]

dont smoke its not good for you

...it takes life from you and this track could use a bit more of life... more changes in rhythm, but other than that it's nice (:)

DelitescentAria responds:

heck u dude ur not my mum

thanks tho

[Spirit Of The Forest]

hey there, I really like the basses and synths, though it all happens kind of too fast imo, especially the first drop, which also stops very suddenly, I'd play around that transition to the middle part a bit more.. the guitar that kicks in later is also a nice touch

Production-wise it's perfect, really, nice and loud yet very clear

sounds like you know what you're doing, keep it up :)

Spline-1337 responds:

Thank you)

[Riot Out Of Hell]

whaat

this beats all of my "hard" tracks, the mix is tight and loud and bass sound design super wild,

the drops are perfect, maybe the intro and middle part could be more "sinister" with slower chord changes and more background effects, now it's a bit cheesy

you progressed so much though, keep it up

DelitescentAria responds:

gaaaah! im so happy! thank youuuuuuuuuu!!!